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Currently a student at York U with an English major and a History minor. I live with the books =)

Friday, January 28, 2005

Fire Bad, Satire Funny

Satire was once classified as a genre by Aristotle and was seen as being a poem. The satiric poem was a very specific, definable and used to highlight social or political weakness, moral or fails so that the audience could see what is wrong. In modern times, satire had become a mode and no longer a form of writing. It is now a writing style but it still highlights social problems.

Satire is the literary art of diminishing something to make fun of it. It can also invoke a feeling of scorn, indignation and anger. The two great original satirists were Horace and Juvenal, and each had his own style. Horace would point out what was wrong by using light hearted dry-wit humor, and tended to stand back a bit so that people could see the errors on their own. Juvenal wanted his audience to be angry, enraged and vicious so his writings were laced with his own anger.

One of the satirists that I enjoy is Jonathan Swift. I studied his Modest Proposal last year and was eager to see what his poetry would be like. So from the Norton, I decided to look at The Lady's Dressing Room, on page 530-533. Upon the first read, I was appalled by the images that Swift paints of Celia (the lady who's room it is)! They are so graphic and rude...but then I remembered that this was a satire! So Swift was being serious but not. Serious in the way that there is something wrong with what he has chosen to focus on...a lady's toillette routine that involves so much work behind it. And not serious because he is trying to poke fun at the scene and show through humor that a lady's beauty routine is highly over rated...which it really is =)

I really do recommend reading The Lady's Dressing Room, despite its length. Try hard to get past the one page limit that Prof. Kuin keeps talking about, because the poem is worth the read. I will not be posting the whole poem here because it is rather lengthy, but shall put snippets that I want to highlight.

Now listen while he next produces
The various combs for various uses,
Filled with dirt so closely fixt,
No brush could force a way betwixt.
A paste of composition rare,
Sweat, dandruff, powder, lead and hair.

Strephon had just found the combs that Celia uses on her hair. He is disgusted to find that they are laced with gross properties. He is revolted by the notion that the teeth of the combs are crammed full with this gunk! He has every reason to feel naueseated because it truly is a foul image, but on the flip side one has to remember that that stuff has been in Celia's hair. It has been in her hair in the name of beauty...her poor poor hair!

But oh! it turned poor Strephon's bowels,
When he beheld and smelled the towels,
Begummed, bemattered, and beslimed
With dirt, and sweat, and earwax grimed.

So this snippet, like the entire poem is written in an easy to see rhyme scheme of aabb, which gives the poem a song like quality almost. But I don't think that the poem would turn into a break away pop hit because of its theme...sad but true. I just thought that these lines were hilarious and cleverly written. I especially liked the alliteration in the third line when referring to the state of towels. It makes you almost see the grime that laces these towels and why it turned Strephon's bowels.

For Strephon ventured to look in,
He lifts the lid, there needs no more,
He smelled it all the time before.
As from within Pandora's box,
When Epimetheus op'd the locks,
A sudden universal crew
Of human evils upwards flew;
He still was comforted to find
That Hope at last remained behind

Here we have a description of Strephon looking into Celia's chamber pot, which if you don't know what that is, it would be the equivalent to a portable toilet in her room. Here Swift is equating Strephon's peeping to that of looking into Pandora's box. Opening something that should remain a mystery because of the peril that it will cause the world and the person that opened it specifically. I thought that was a clever use of allusion to refer to mythology to give the action more layers of meaning. If you are unaware of the Pandora myth, then just look at the footnote in the Norton since they provide an ample description of it.

Such order from confusion sprung,
Such gaudy tulips raised from dung.

This little couplet closes the poem and for me sealed what satiric poem I would blog about this week. Within those two lines, Swift is able to encapsulate the crux of his entire poem...that gaudy tulips raise from dung! So when Swift indicates order, I think he is being truly ironical and is actually referring to the disorder that we all live in and the confusion would belong to Celia who isn't sure what she needs to do to fit into the order. The tulips represent the youth and natural beauty of Celia, while gaudy refers to what she is doing to herself (the hair, the make-up, and the clothes) and the overdone state that it puts her in and dung refers to the societal crap that dictates that women need to go through the process of becoming gaudy tulips to fit into society. With a message like that you could almost see this being written by someone in our present time since it is still very relevant.

sv


Friday, January 21, 2005

Feeling the Need...the Need for an Iliad Post

So seeing as I was unable to attend Monday's lecture, and couldn't possibly post another time on love, I've decided to go with a blurb on a few interesting things that I found in the Iliad. I recently picked it up, dusted the darn thing off (since I haven't read it since before the holiday break!) and resumed my reading at Book Six. In one sitting I managed to read on until Book Ten and along the way found some interesting things...

#1.
In Book Six, from lines 474- 503, Hektor's wife Andromakhe gives a rather moving and foretelling speech to him. She is worried for Hektor's life if Akhilleus returns to battle and can see herself becoming a widow. She is already an orphan because Akhilleus killed both her parents and all of her brothers before she married Hektor.

How creepy is that? That the man that killed her immediate and blood related family will also go on to kill her husband? I found that rather chilling...but if you hadn't already seen the movie or finished the text then I totally just ruined it for you and you may not have had the same interpretation of that speech that I did! If you didn't know that Hektor was killed then:

a. I'm sorry for ruining the end of the Iliad for you! But you had to know that it was coming.
b. You may have just thought that Andromakhe is a bit on the crazy paranoid side!

#2.
Now this occurrence happened twice so far during me read and I found it rather bizarre and if anyone has any input on why it happened then please pass it on!

So once in Book Six between Diomedes and Hippolokhos, and then again in Book Seven between Hektor and Aias during the heat of battle these two combatents just walked away! They chatted for a while in both cases and exchanged some minor blows but then decided to call it quits...why?! In the example in Book Six, then men exchanged armor as a sign of peace which I understand as a demonstration of faith. But I don't get why there was the demonstration of faith? There is a war being waged and these men just walked away? I really don't get it.

#3.
This last bit is about a fantastic image created in Book Eight, lines 380- 387:

Hektor, elated, leading the attach.
You know the way a hunting dog will harry
a wild boar or a lion after a chase,
and try to nip him from behind, to fasten
on flank or rump, alert for an opening
as the quarry turns and turns; darting like that,
Hektor harried the long-haired men of Akhaia,
killing off strangers one by one.

Hektor is dipicted as a wild animal who is ravinous for the kill. He chases down his prey, the Akhaians, skillfully and masterfully. Picking them off one by one when the moment is right. This image of hunting is repeated constantly throughout the Iliad, both to describe the Trojans and the Akhaians, and I think that it is an effective image. I think that it is usedful because the people at the time the Iliad was originally told would have had much experience in the way of hunting because that would have been the way that they obtained their meat. So the men could have related to Hektor's actions and motivation. Also, war is very much like hunting in the way that one side is the killer while the other is the lamb for the slaughter.

sv

Saturday, January 15, 2005

Love Blocked

So I've been having some trouble getting to this post for what is now last week...opps! Not due of lack of ideas because there are a number that are floating around in my head, like taking apart Shakespeare's A Lover's Complaint as mentioned in class or looking into the different types of love. But those ideas just haven't actually seemed to spark my fingers to move to the keys...mayhap another week.

So I've settled on looking at a song (an idea which I totally stole from Sidd's blog...sorry and at the same time thanks hun!) that means something to me in terms of love. I realize that a song is not truly a poem but as we discussed at the start of the course a number of us considered song lyrics to be pretty darn close to being a poem in terms of the emotions conveyed.

The song that I selected is written and performed by Scott Stapp, the former lead singer for Creed, and performed for a soundtrack (The Passion of the Christ). It is called Relearn Love:
and if anyone is interested in hearing the song, then just go to: http://www.scottstapp.com/ and it is right on the main page. The song is truly touching and hopefully inspires someone as it did me:

On a dark and lonely highway
I need the SON to raise my head.
I come before you…I am naked...
The man I am now must be shed.
I’ve weathered storms and I am broken.
My beaten heart is in your hands...
What I really need is shelter and a chance

To relearn love...
Teach me all over…all over...
To relearn love...
Show me again...
So I can relearn love...

The Comfort of your arms around me...
Your tender hands caress my head
I lay beside you I m not worthy
This jaded mans not who I am
I’ve touched the flame and I’ve been burned
All I need is a second chance
Give me eyes of a child
And teach this man…To relearn love

Teach me all over…all over
To relearn love…show me again
To relearn love…teach me all over…all over
To relearn love…show me again
So I can relearn love

I was selfish…but you still loved me
You gave the greatest gift of all and it set me free
When time means nothing and your world is standing still
Listen world he’s calling when you feel me drop and kneel
Can you feel it?
Just remember, oh oh remember...
To relearn love

Relearn my love
Show me, show me
To relearn my love
Teach me now…now
Relearn my love
To relearn, relearn my love
So I can relearn love...

So on the surface the song is obviously about the love of Christ and its redeeming powers for someone that has fallen from grace. Well obvious to anyone that is of the Christian faith at least and to anyone that can make the connection between the song and the soundtrack that it is produced for. Plus I think the capitalization of the word SON might be a tell-tale sign. But at any rate, I will not be talking about those parallels though and will focus more on human love between a man and another human being.

In the first verse where Stapp sings: "I come before you…I am naked.../The man I am now must be shed./I’ve weathered storms and I am broken./My beaten heart is in your hands..." I think that he is talking about entering into a new relationship with someone. We are all very vulnerable, naked if you will, when starting a new love affair and we're placing our heart in the hands of our new partner to do what they will. Any past love relationship would be considered a storm that has been endured because if it has now ended then there was some reason or another that the couple parted ways and often one person is broken.

The second verse speaks about the persona having: "touched the flame and I’ve been burned". I think that the flame being referred to is the hottest point of being in love. That high point where one's flesh feels like it could be seared off due to the heat being emitted by the emotions and passion being felt. The burning from this flame comes from the idea that the love is no longer being returned or has ended for good. The persona asks for the "eyes of a child" which shows that he wants to return to innocence. Children see things more clearly than most adults because they are not as prejudice, biased or have been hurt by love as adults have.

Finally I think the whole idea of relearning love is both a novel and a brilliant idea! It is novel in the way that most of us wouldn't think that love is one of those things that can be learned at all. Generally in order to learn something it would have to be a skill or a feat of some kind, but love doesn't appear to be either of those things. However if you truly think about it, then to love someone well is really a skill that requires practice and the opportunity to change and grow.

Also most of us could stand to relearn how to love, because there has been some action, or dialogue that has been done while in love that wasn't as desirable as it could be. We treated our love badly and then in turn felt bad for our brutish behaviour. But what if we relearned how to love and negated that bad feeling on both sides? Brilliant n'est pas?!

sv

Thursday, January 06, 2005

Down with Love...For Now At Least

So this week's topic was love poetry...great! I say that half heartedly because currently I'm in a phase where love is at the bottom of my personal totem pole. See my last post for further explanation because I think that the poem I wrote will explain it all! Professor Kuin did say that depending on where your personal emotions rest when reading love poetry, your interpretation of it will be different. What an understatement! While listening to the poems read in tutorial I couldn't get engaged at all and the metaphors were meaningless rubbish for me!

Since I'm currently out of love's favour, I've decided to do something rather interesting and have put three poems below. First we have a sonnet which I remember fondly enjoying when in love's favor and will no doubt enjoy it once more when love stops kicking my ass!

Sonnet 141
William Shakespeare

In faith I do not love thee with mine eyes,
For they in thee a thousand errors note;
But 'tis my heart that loves what they despise,
Who, in despite of view, is pleased to dote.
Nor are mine ears with thy tongue's tune delighted;
Nor tender feeling, to base touches prone,
Nor taste, nor smell, desire to be invited
To any sensual feast with thee alone:
But my five wits nor my five senses can
Dissuade one foolish heart from serving thee,
Who leaves unswayed the likeness of a man,
Thy proud heart's slave and vassal wretch to be:
Only my plague thus far I count my gain,
That she that makes me sin awards me pain.

I'm going to go out on a limb and say that most of us have heard that poem at some point or another in either our academic or personal careers. It's a tried, tested and true favourite of many and rightly so I believe! Shakespeare is a master playwright and a bloody brilliant poet too. If that was your first time with the poem then I hope you enjoyed Shakespeare's rendition of not being sure why a poor chap is in love despite noting all of these errors in his love.

The second poem that is posted is one taken from the movie 10 Things I Hate about You which is loosely based on Shakespeare's Taming of the Shrew. The poem was written by one of the characters (Katrina) as an English assignment. The class was assigned to re-write Sonnet 141. At the time of Katrina's composition she is being tormented by love, so her version provides a stark contrast to the original sonnet in the way that it lacks the fluidity of language. Nor does she try to make excuses for her boyfriend's behaviour, demeanor and characteristics :

I hate the way you talk to me,
And the way you cut your hair
I hate the way you drive my car
I hate it when you stare.
I hate your big dumb combat boots
and the way you read my mind
I hate you so much it makes me sick;
it even makes me rhyme
I hate the way you’re always right.
I hate it when you lie.
I hate it when you make me laugh,
even worse when you make me cry
I hate the fact that you’re not around,
and the fact that you didn’t call
But mostly I hate the way I don’t hate you.
Not even close, not even a little bit, not at all


Sadly the poem isn't written in the correct form of a sonnet...note the 16 lines. Nor is there the consistent sonnet rhyme scheme of ababcdcdefefgg that can be easily found within Sonnet 141. Still the poem demonstrates how fickle love is and the range of emotions that it can make us feel.
The final poem that I've posted is one of my own creation. I decided to do what Katrina did...re-write Shakespeare's sonnet! I've decided to stay within the parameters of a sonnet so hello 14 lines of iambic pentameter and greetings to a rhyme scheme of ababcdcdefefgg:

I burn for you but why is not too clear.
You dress in plan and simple wears. Such a bore
To see indeed! And your cologne my dear,
Is much too heavy, repulsive even. What's more
You lack common reason and have little charm.
The gifts you give are not many this is true,
But cost a lot and shine too! Do not alarm
Just yet, because there still is hope for you.
You have a nice firm ass which makes me hot
And want your body! Plus your caress is well,
Magic or from heaven! I near forgot
Of your...oh wait! There is nothing to tell
Except that you claimed me with a kiss;
That left me dazed and want to talk like this.

So that is my first attempt at a sonnet. Aside from the lame, if not horrible reasons for either liking or disliking my fictitious beau, I think its alright. The rhyme scheme is sooo there which wasn't as hard as I thought. I'm hoping that I executed the iambic pentameter on each line, which after a while didn't give me as much trouble as I thought it would. Feel free to criticize my poem or even write your own.

sv

Sunday, January 02, 2005

A New Year

So the New Year is here...not sure what it will bring yet. Though it did manage to inspire me to write this poem below. Thanks to the muses for infusing me with enlightening, however overly depressing emotions!

Presumptions

You presume to know me
You can tell how I am feeling in my shattered heart
Know what thoughts race through my clouded head
But really you haven't the faintest clue as to who I am
The things that make me me elude you
What I feel isn't known because you don't care
For you emotion is governed by a switch
Something that you can turn off and on like a light
You flick it on when it suits your whims
Then off when you no longer need anyone
You don't realize the results of your ingnorance
Nor how much you hurt a gentle soul that wanted to know you
To cherish you in her heart and make you her world
You switched yourself off so that no one could get to you
These repercussions may not seem grave just yet
But one will come back to haunt you
The loss of me

sv